famous bipolar quotesWhat do think of this research BPD?

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Everyone knows about Depression, Schizophrenia, Bipolar, and anxiety disorder, but does anyone know what Borderline Personality Disorder is about? It is one of the most common disorders in our society. Almost 10 million Americans or more may be affected by BPD. Out of the 10 million 75% are women. People all over the world suffer and some to this day, don’t know what they are suffering from. It is a relatively new disorder so it might be unknown to general population. Though the disorder was first defined in the 1930's, it was only in the 1970's that people began seeking therapy for the disorder. In the 1980's BPD was included in the American Psychiatric Association Diagnostic manual, third edition, called the DSM-III, the diagnostic 'bible'' of the psychiatric profession. What is Borderline Personality Disorder, how can we recognize a person with Borderline Personality disorder and how can it be treated? There is a famous quote written by Thomas Sydenham, who was 1700s century English physician, ‘’ They love without measure those whom they will hate without reason.’’
Border line personality has few causes. It can be triggered, by severe environmental conditions, strict family back round and it can also be hereditary. Today’s society requires people to meet its expectations. If a family is strict in its upbringing the pressure becomes ten times harder. ‘’ Smart remarks at home were unthinkable. Authority reigned there. Control. Express an inappropriate emotion, expect a slap’’ (Rayland famous bipolar quotes10).A vulnerable personality might break under such pressure that is thrown at them resulting in a lot of different disorders. One of these disorders is Borderline Personality disorder. People with BDP suffer their whole life and they always say that world is very harsh and scary place.
It’s hard to live with Borderline Personality Disorder because it can trigger other maladies. BPD can have or has other disorders that can camouflage or contribute to the other disorder like depression, alcoholism or anorexia. ‘’ The bacon, which had been tucked tightly in my cheeks, flew directly into the toilet. The perfect solution. He thought he won’’ ( Kreisman 23). No one knows whether the personality disorder contributed or other disorders contributed to the personality disorder. It’s also stress that can contribute to the predisposition personality. It can be that under the stress borderline personality can turn to drugs, or develop an eating disorder, or even become severely depressed. It’s hard for people who have problems finding out that they have more problems in their life than they can handle.
One of the hardest tasks is defining BPD because its very similar to other disorders, but DSM- III- R lists eight symptoms that must be present for diagnosis. Those five symptoms include unstable relationships, impulsiveness in behavior, severe mood shifts, inappropriate displays of anger that are frequent, suicidal threats, lack of sense of identity , feeling of emptiness or boredom, and avoidance of abandonment.
Is it an essay or something you are doingfamous bipolar quotes?

to be honest theres parts that don't make sense like its been copied and pasted.

you say BPD can be heridtory but there is no proof of that what so ever - its suggested it MIGHT be but you cant state it is.

the quotes dont really make sense or feel at all nesscary- sorry.

If this is for school/uni etc I think you need to organise what you want to talk about first, it feels like everything is fired in together and also simplify it because it reads like sentences copied and pasted together.

I think if your going to put in quotes you need to explain them or their relevance like the first once from the 1700 writer....the quote is there but the reader is still wondering what that has to do with BPD and what it means.

when your reading an essay you have to think of it from the point of view of someone who knows nothing about BPD and that if they pic up your piece of work they will understand it even without prior knowledge of the subject

sorry to be so critical but if you handed that in as a piece of work I think it would get criticised for many of the same reasons.

all the best
This is very good.
BPD is no fun to have I have it along with bi polar and hypothyroidism. Been times I just scream I think I am going crazy. I do agree with your research on it. But may want to look more into what other disorders that may follow with it. but otherwise it defined it well. If this all your research might want to go more in depth I can see 3 things missing in the research